2020英语写作训练：读后续写精选9

读后续写精选9

阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Christmas Day was coming. I was just a kid then,and my big sister told me there was no Santa Claus. I fled to my Grandma because she would be straight with me. I knew Grandma always told me the truth. Grandma was home, and I told her everything. She was ready for me. “No Santa Claus !” She shouted. “Ridiculous! Don't believe it.” That rumor has been going around for years, and it makes me mad, plain mad.

“Now, put on your coat, and let's go.”

“Go where, Grandma?” I asked. “Where” turned out to be Kerby's General Store, the one store in town that had a little bit of just about everything. As we walked through its doors, Grandma handed me ten dollars. “Take this money.” she said, “and buy something for someone who needsit. I'll wait for you in the car.” Then she turned and walked out of Kerby's.

I was only eight years old. I'd often gone shopping with my mother, but never had I shopped for anything all by myself. The store seemed big and crowded, full of people competing to finish their Christmas shopping. For a few moments I just stood there, confused, holdingthat ten-dollar bill, wondering what to buy and who to buy it for. I suddenly thought of Bobby Decker, who was a kid with bad breath and messy hair. He sat right behind me in Mrs Pollock's grade—two class.

Bobby Decker didn't have a coat. I knew that because he never went out for recess during the winter. His mother always wrote a note,telling the teacher that he had a cough, but we kids knew that Bobby Decker didn't have a cough, and he didn't have a coat. I would buy Bobby Decker a coat! I settled on a red one, which looked really warm, and he would like that.

“Is this a Christmas present for someone?” the lady behind the counter asked kindly, as I laid my ten dollars down. “Yes.”

The nice lady smiled at me, put the coat in a bag and wished me a Merry Christmas.

 

Para 1:That evening, Grandma helped me wrap the coat in Christmas paper.
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Para 2:
Grandma and I waited breathlessly for Bobby Decker's front door to open and finally it opened.
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参考答案
Paragraph 1:That evening, Grandma helped me wrap the coat in Christmas paper. She wrote “To Bobby, From Santa Claus” on it, after which she drove me over to Bobby Decker's house, explaining I was officially one of Santa's helpers. Grandma parked down the street form Bobby's house, and I took a deep breath, and dashed for his front door. Seeing no other people notice us, I put the Christmas present down, pounded his doorbell and then Grandma and I hid in the car.

Paragraph 2:Grandma and I waited breathlessly for Bobby Decker's front door to open and finally it opened. Out went Bobby Decker. Seeing the coat in the bag, he looked very astonished and then called his mother to go out. After hearing them say “Thanks” to Santa Claus, I felt very proud of what I had done. At that time I decided to be Santa's helper for ever. It was on that night that I realized the truth that he who has no Christmas in his heart will never find Christmas under a tree.

这是一篇读后续写作文。通过阅读所给文章可知，作者的姐姐告诉作者世界上没有圣诞老人，作者逃到奶奶那里想要听奶奶说实话，结果奶奶把作者带到一个商店，给了作者10美元，让作者给有需要的人买东西，于是作者给坐在自己后面的Bobby Decker买了一件红色的外套。

续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：那天晚上，奶奶帮我用圣诞包装纸把大衣包好。所以后文应该是讲述作者和奶奶如何去给Bobby Decker送外套的经过。第二段开头是：奶奶和我屏息等待Bobby Decker的前门打开，终于它打开了。本段应该写Bobby Decker收到外套后的反应，以及这件事后作者的内心活动，作者为自己的所作所为感到非常自豪，决定永远做圣诞老人的帮手。

最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右。

本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：drive over(开车前往), one of(……其中之一), dash for(冲向……)等高级词汇短语；Seeing no other people notice us, I put the Christmas present down, pounded his doorbell and then Grandma and I hid in the car.运用了非谓语动词作状语；It was on that night that I realized the truth that he who has no Christmas in his heart will never find Christmas under a tree.运用了定语从句等高级句式。